I wonder if the length of the stanzas have anything to do with the design of a wave... (first thought that jumped into my head) 5..3..4..
another awesome piece of work Puja gal... "the waves never stop coming to the shore and it only increases on a full moon " :P
Simply titled as love is a small but scintillating poem about how we get drowned in a certain emotion for some one else.
Whats impressive as always with Puja Gokarn's work is the word play and the ambiguity and how it appeals differently to every other person. (wash over...breathless)
Unjustified question with known answers overflowing emotions drowned in misery the chocking feeling around the neck and a tight hook pulling you from behind you navel
I like this boy ^ having said that, when the sea is done washing over you, it leaves behind bits of sand in between your toes. this is yours. and you're meant to have it for a reason...
I wonder if the length of the stanzas have anything to do with the design of a wave...
ReplyDelete(first thought that jumped into my head)
5..3..4..
another awesome piece of work Puja gal...
"the waves never stop coming to the shore and it only increases on a full moon " :P
Simply titled as love is a small but scintillating poem about how we get drowned in a certain emotion for some one else.
Whats impressive as always with Puja Gokarn's work is the word play and the ambiguity and how it appeals differently to every other person.
(wash over...breathless)
Unjustified question with known answers
overflowing emotions drowned in misery
the chocking feeling around the neck
and a tight hook pulling you from behind you navel
awaiting more...
I like this boy ^
ReplyDeletehaving said that, when the sea is done washing over you, it leaves behind bits of sand in between your toes. this is yours. and you're meant to have it for a reason...